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I take refuge, for the deputies are with observation

ุฃุนุงุฐู„ ุฅู† ุงู„ู†ุงุฆุจุงุช ุจู…ุฑุตุฏ

1. I take refuge, for the deputies are with observation
And indeed, one's joy is not immortal

ูก. ุฃุนุงุฐูู„ู ุฅู†ู‘ูŽ ุงู„ู†ู‘ูŽุงุฆุจุงุชู ุจู…ูŽุฑุตูŽุฏู
ูˆุฅู†ู‘ูŽ ุณุฑูˆุฑูŽ ุงู„ู…ุฑุกู ุบูŠุฑู ู…ูุฎูŽู„ู‘ูŽุฏู

2. If a day of good living passes
Connect it with a day of comfortable good living

ูข. ุฅุฐุง ู…ุถู‰ ูŠูˆู…ูŒ ู…ู† ุงู„ุนูŠุดู ุตูŽุงู„ุญูŒ
ููŽุตูู„ู’ู‡ู ุจูŠูˆู…ู ุตุงู„ุญู ุงู„ุนูŠุดู ู…ูุฑุบูุฏู

3. And a goblet of its beauty and grace
Even if the cessation of passion and trinkets appears

ูฃ. ูˆุญุงู„ูŠุฉู ู…ู† ุญูุณู†ูู‡ุง ูˆุฌูŽู…ุงู„ูู‡ุง
ูˆุฅู† ุจุฑุฒูŽุชู’ ุนูุทู„ูŽ ุงู„ุดู‘ูŽูˆู‰ ูˆุงู„ู…ูู‚ูŽู„ู‘ูŽุฏู

4. It gives you an unfinished cup as if
Its occurrences are the pupils of a polished coat of mail

ูค. ุชูุนุงุทูŠูƒูŽ ูƒุฃุณุงู‹ ุบูŠุฑูŽ ู…ู„ุฃู‰ ูƒุฃู†ู‘ูŽู…ุง
ููˆุงู‚ูุนูู‡ุง ุฃุญุฏุงู‚ู ุฏูุฑู’ุนู ู…ูุฒูŽุฑู‘ูŽุฏู

5. As if its heights are conversationsโ€™ whiteness
Waving on the reddening of a red pocket

ูฅ. ูƒุฃู†ู‘ูŽ ุฃุนุงู„ูŠู‡ุง ุจูŽูŠุงุถู ุณูŽูˆุงู„ูู
ุชูŽู„ูˆุญู ุนู„ู‰ ุชูŽูˆุฑูŠุฏู ุฌูŽูŠู’ุจู ู…ููˆูŽุฑู‘ูŽุฏู