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I sacrifice myself for the one whose forehead in his hair

أفدي الذي جبينه في شعره

1. I sacrifice myself for the one whose forehead in his hair
Is the glimmer of dawn under the skirts of darkness

١. أفدِي الذي جبينه في شعرهِ
طرَّةُ صبحٍ تحت أذيال الدجى

2. Why should I meet him though my house is near his?
For have you seen his ravishing mouth when he smiles?

٢. مالي به مع قرب داري ملتقًى
فهل رأيت ثغره المفلَّجا