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A brother came to me after a long absence

أتاني أخ من غيبة كان غابها

1. A brother came to me after a long absence
When he was away, I would recite his name in verse

١. أَتاني أَخٌ مِن غَيبَةٍ كانَ غابَها
وَكُنتُ إِذا ما غابَ أَنشُدُهُ رَكبا

2. He came with plentiful kindness and hid it
As a shepherd hides thorns in the fold's midst

٢. فَجاءَ بِمَعروفٍ كَثيرٍ فَدَسَّهُ
كَما دَسَّ راعي السَوءِ في حِضنِهِ الوَطَبا

3. I said "Have you brought me a gift?"
He said "It's myself," I said "Would I give a cur praise?"

٣. فَقُلتُ لَهُ هَل جِئتَني بِهِدِيَّةٍ
فَقالَ بِنَفسي قُلتُ أَتحِف بِها الكَلبا

4. It's the self, I wouldn't mourn it if it came to harm
Nor wish I'd seen any blessing brought its way

٤. هِيَ النَفسُ لا أَرثي لَها مِن بَلِيَّةٍ
وَلا أَتَمَنّى أَن رَأَيتُ لَها قُربا