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A slender beauty, her robe in tatters bundled,

ุนู‚ูŠู„ูŠุฉ ุฃู…ุง ู…ู„ุงุซ ุฅุฒุงุฑู‡ุง

1. A slender beauty, her robe in tatters bundled,
Her waist so fine, a wisp that can be held!

ูก. ุนูู‚ูŽูŠูู„ูŠู‘ูŽุฉูŒ ุฃูŽู…ู‘ุง ู…ูŽู„ุงุซู ุฅูุฒุงุฑูู‡ุง
ููŽุฏูุนุตูŒ ูˆูŽุฃูŽู…ู‘ุง ุฎูŽุตุฑูู‡ุง ููŽุจูŽุชููŠู„ู

2. She sits composed within the fire's embers
Cooled in the shade of branches triple-layered.

ูข. ุชูŽุฑูŽุจู‘ูŽุนู ุฃูŽูƒู†ูŽุงููŽ ุงู„ุญูู…ูŽู‰ ูˆูŽู…ูŽู‚ููŠู„ูู‡ุง
ุจุชูŽุซู„ููŠุซูŽ ู…ูู† ุธูู„ู‘ู ุงู„ุฃูŽุฑูŽุงูƒู ุธูŽู„ูŠู„ู

3. O loveliness of life, and yet lifeโ€™s limits!โ€”
My hope, is there a path that leads to you?

ูฃ. ุฃูŽูŠูŽุง ุฒูŽูŠู†ูŽุฉูŽ ุงู„ุฏู‘ูู†ูŠุง ูˆู…ุง ู…ูู†ุชูŽู‡ูŽู‰ ุงู„ู…ูู†ูŽู‰
ูˆูŽูŠุง ุฃูŽู…ูŽู„ูู‰ ู‡ูŽู„ ู„ูู‰ ุฅูู„ูŽูŠูƒู ุณูŽุจููŠู„ู

4. For you, my enemies Iโ€™d ransom utterly,
Though few stand by me, and my woes accrue.

ูค. ููŽุฏูŽูŠุชููƒู ุฃูŽุนุฏุงุฆูู‰ ูƒูŽุซููŠุฑูŒ ูˆูŽุดูู‚ู‘ูŽุชูู‰
ุจูŽุนููŠุฏูŒ ูˆูŽุฃูŽู†ุตูŽุงุฑูู‰ ู„ูŽุฏูŽูŠูƒู ู‚ูŽู„ูŠู„ู

5. When I would come, excuses I would tender,
Yet Iโ€™ve no plea left nowโ€”what can I do?

ูฅ. ูˆูŽูƒูู†ุชู ุฅูุฐุง ู…ุง ุฌูุฆุชู ุฌูุฆุชู ุจูุนูู„ู‘ูŽุฉู
ููŽุฃูŽูู†ูŽูŠุชู ุนูู„ุงู‘ุชูู‰ ููŽูƒูŽูŠููŽ ุฃูŽู‚ููˆู„ู