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Yes, these are the abodes, so greet them

ู†ุนู… ู‡ุฐูŠ ุงู„ุฏูŠุงุฑ ูุญูŠู‡ู†ู‡

1. Yes, these are the abodes, so greet them
With the greeting of one enamored of their length

ูก. ู†ุนู… ู‡ุฐูŠ ุงู„ุฏู‘ููŠุงุฑู ูุญูŠู‘ูู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽู‡
ุชูŽุญูŠู‘ูŽุฉูŽ ู…ูุบูŽุฑู…ู ุจูุทูู„ูˆู„ูู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽู‡

2. Grant me a standing, O Saad, wherein
You make me happy, be that one of them

ูข. ุฃูŽุนูุฑู†ูŠ ูˆูŽู‚ูุฉู‹ ูŠุง ุณูŽุนุฏู ููŠู‡ุง
ู„ูุชูุณุนูุฏูŽู†ูŠ ุชูƒู† ู„ูƒูŽ ุฃูŠู‘ู ู…ูู†ู‘ูŽู‡

3. Abodes whose right upon me is duty
Though upon lovers itโ€™s become tradition

ูฃ. ุฏูŠุงุฑูŒ ุญูŽู‚ู‘ูู‡ู†ู‘ูŽ ุนู„ูŠู‘ูŽ ูุฑุถูŒ
ูˆุฅู† ุฃูŽุถุญุช ุนู„ู‰ ุงู„ุนูุดู‘ูŽุงู‚ู ุณูู†ู‘ูŽุฉ

4. It suffices that my tear's halt when
The clouds of spring dry up their meadows

ูค. ูƒูŽูุงู‡ุง ุงู„ูˆูŽูƒูู ู…ู† ุฏู…ูŽุนูŠ ุฅุฐุง ู…ุง
ุฌูŽููŽุช ุณูุญุจู ุงู„ุฑู‘ูŽุจูŠุนู ุฑูุจูˆุนูŽู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽู‡

5. Iโ€™ve eyelids with tears that do not cease
Though comforts flow to them copiously

ูฅ. ูู„ูŠ ุฃุฌูุงู†ู ุฏู…ุนู ู„ูŠุณูŽ ุชุฃู„ูˆ
ุชูŽุณูุญู‘ู ู„ู‡ุง ุบููŠูˆุซูŒ ู…ูุฑุฌูŽุญู†ู‘ูŽู‡

6. We complained of their weather, and hearts
From the distant scatter are tranquil

ูฆ. ุดูŽูƒูˆู†ุง ุฌูŽูˆู‘ูŽู‡ุง ูˆู„ูŽู‡ุง ู‚ูู„ูˆุจู
ู…ู† ุงู„ุจูŠู†ู ุงู„ูู…ุดูŽุชุชู ู…ูุทู…ูŽุฆูู†ู‘ูŽู‡

7. As for their gazelles, the does whose eyes
Passed, taking my blood their premier game

ูง. ุฃู…ุง ูˆุธุจุงุฆู‡ุง ุงู„ุนูŠู† ุงู„ู„ู‘ูŽูˆุงุชูŠ
ู…ุถุช ุจุฏู…ูŠ ุธูุจุง ุงู„ุญุงุธูู‡ู†ู‘ูŽู‡

8. With them my tenderness, eyelids gained
Bared swords against me, honed their edges

ูจ. ู„ู‚ุฏ ู…ู„ูƒุช ุจู‡ุง ุฑูู‚ู‘ููŠ ุฌููˆู†ูŒ
ู…ูุฌุฑู‘ูŽุฏุฉูŒ ุนู„ูŠู‘ูŽ ุณููŠูˆููู‡ู†ู‘ูŽู‡

9. As if their slender waists were lancesโ€™ points
Made for them from the keenest iron

ูฉ. ูƒุฃู†ู‘ูŽ ู‚ูุฏูˆุฏูŽู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽ ุฑูู…ุงุญู ุฎุทู‘ู
ุนู…ู„ู†ูŽ ู„ู‡ู†ู‘ูŽ ู…ู† ุญุฏู‚ู ุฃุณู†ู‘ูŽู‡

10. When the branches of the acacia bend
Laden with their ripened fruits

ูกู . ุฅุฐุง ู…ุง ู…ู„ูู†ูŽ ู‚ู„ุชู ุบุตูˆู†ู ุจุงู†ู
ูˆู‚ุฏ ุฃุซู‚ู„ู†ูŽู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽ ุซูู…ุงุฑูŽู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽู‡

11. I think my cheekโ€™s dusk when it turned away
Was its companion as it turned from them

ูกูก. ุฃุธูู†ู‘ู ุณูˆุงุฏูŽ ููŽูˆุฏูŠ ุญูŠู† ูˆู„ู‘ูŽู‰
ูˆู‚ุฏ ูˆูŽู„ู‘ูŽูŠู†ูŽ ูƒุงู†ูŽ ุญูŽู„ููŠููŽู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽู‡