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They turned away, though I know not why,

هم قد جفوا وجفاهم ماله سبب

1. They turned away, though I know not why,
Each time my heart is kind, they angry grow.

١. هُم قد جَفَوا وجفاهُم مالهُ سببُ
وكلَّما جادَ قلبي بالرِّصا غَضبوا

2. I'd ransom them, though our pact they deny,
If they but mentioned me, be it high or low.

٢. أفديهمُ إن نضسوا عَهدي وإن ذَكروا
بِمُقلتيَّ وإن شَطُّوا وإن قربُوا

3. Be they most just or unjust in love's span,
Or blame the smitten one, or him who withdrew,

٣. وإن هُم أقسطوا في الحُب أو قسطوا
واعتبوا المستهامَ الصبَّ أم عَتبوا

4. I clung to them when life's boughs burgeoned and ran
With sap, and the days of youth were fresh with dew,

٤. عُلِّقتهُم وغُصونُ العُمرِ مورقةٌ
ريَّانةٌ وجلابيبُ الصبِّا قُشبُ

5. No, by Him from whom came the boon of their grace,
By hand and troth, their due cannot be ignored,

٥. لا والذي أسلفُوني من صنيعتهم
قدماً وهذي يمينٌ حقُّها يجبُ

6. Their signposts stood though the campfire died apace
And lightning flickers spawned by the clouds were stored

٦. جادَت معالِمهُم وطفاءُ ساريةٌ
تبيتُ فيها حواشي البَرقِ تَلتَهبُ

7. In the skies above their land, which never ran dry
Though barren, with roots in its dirt reaching the sky.

٧. ولا جَفَت أرضهم والأرضُ مُجدبةٌ
سحابةٌ ذيلُها في التُّربِ ينحسبُ