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O you whose footsteps in excellence are firmly rooted

ูŠุง ู…ู† ู„ู‡ ู‚ุฏู… ููŠ ุงู„ูุถู„ ุฑุงุณุฎุฉ

1. O you whose footsteps in excellence are firmly rooted
And you whose banner in knowledge is raised high

ูก. ูŠุง ู…ูŽู† ู„ูŽู‡ู ู‚ูŽุฏูŽู…ูŒ ููŠ ุงู„ููŽุถู„ู ุฑุงุณูุฎูŽุฉูŒ
ูˆูŽู…ูŽู† ู„ูŽู‡ู ุนูŽู„ูŽู…ูŒ ููŠ ุงู„ุนูู„ู…ู ู…ูŽุฑููˆุนู

2. And you whose words cut like an unsheathed sword
And whose mind in poetry is an overflowing spring

ูข. ูˆูŽู…ูŽู† ู„ูŽู‡ู ู…ูู‚ูˆูŽู„ูŒ ูƒูŽุงู„ุณูŽูŠูู ู…ูู†ุตูŽู„ูุชูŒ
ูˆูŽุฎุงุทูุฑูŒ ุจูŽุญุฑูู‡ู ููŠ ุงู„ุดูุนุฑู ูŠูŽู†ุจูˆุนู

3. Your talent assists your versification
For not all who recite poetry have talent

ูฃ. ู„ูŽู‡ู ุนูŽู„ู‰ ู†ูŽุธู…ูู‡ู ุทูŽุจุนูŒ ูŠูุณุงุนูุฏูู‡ู
ู…ุง ูƒูู„ู‘ู ู…ูŽู† ู‚ุงู„ูŽ ุดูุนุฑุงู‹ ููŽู‡ูˆูŽ ู…ูŽุทุจูˆุนู

4. Far from your heart be the cracks and pains
That afflict the heart shattered by those who oppose you

ูค. ุญุงุดู‰ ู„ูู‚ูŽู„ุจููƒูŽ ู…ูู† ุตูŽุฏุนู ูˆูŽู…ูู† ุฃูŽู„ูŽู…ู
ุชูŽุนุชุงุฏูู‡ู ู‚ูŽู„ุจู ู…ูŽู† ูŠูŽุดู†ุงูƒูŽ ู…ูŽุตุฏูˆุนู

5. If you spend the night swearing an oath of sorrow
While exhausted by the affliction of days

ูฅ. ููŽุฅูู† ุชูŽุจูุช ุญูู„ููŽ ู‡ูŽู…ู‘ู ู‚ูŽุฏ ุฃูŽุฑูู‚ุชูŽ ู„ูŽู‡ู
ูˆูŽุฃูŽู†ุชูŽ ู…ูู† ู†ูŽูƒูŽุฏู ุงู„ุฃูŽูŠู‘ุงู…ู ู…ูŽู„ุณูˆุนู

6. Such is the nature of life that fools not the valiant
Who wakes still fooled by what had attracted him

ูฆ. ููŽู‡ูŽุฐูู‡ู ุดูŠู…ูŽุฉู ุงู„ุฏูู†ูŠุง ูˆูŽุบูŽูŠุฑู ููŽุชู‰ู‹
ู…ูŽู† ุจุงุชูŽ ูˆูŽู‡ููˆูŽ ุจูู…ุง ุบูŽุฑู‘ูŽุชู‡ู ู…ูŽุฎุฏูˆุนู

7. Your poetry has removed my troubles
Every single of its verses carefully crafted

ูง. ุฃูŽู…ุงุทูŽ ุนูŽู†ู‘ูŠ ุงู„ุฃูŽุฐู‰ ุดูุนุฑูŒ ุจูŽุนูŽุซุชูŽ ุจูู‡ู
ู…ูู†ูŽู‚ู‘ูŽุญุงู‹ ูƒูู„ู‘ู ุจูŽูŠุชู ู…ูู†ู‡ู ู…ูŽุตู†ูˆุนู

8. Poetry that teaches its hearer the art of verse
With antithesis, paronomasia, and embellishment

ูจ. ุดูุนุฑูŒ ูŠูŽุนูŽู„ู‘ูู…ู ู†ูŽุธู…ูŽ ุงู„ุดูุนุฑู ุณุงู…ูุนูŽู‡ู
ููŠู‡ู ุทูุจุงู‚ูŒ ูˆูŽุชูŽุฌู†ูŠุณูŒ ูˆูŽุชูŽุฑุตูŠุนู

9. While othersโ€™ poetry is like basil without fragrance
When its wood withers in the palm without returning

ูฉ. ูˆูŽุดูุนุฑู ุบูŽูŠุฑููƒูŽ ูƒูŽุงู„ุฑูŽูŠุญุงู†ู ู„ูŽูŠุณูŽ ู„ูŽู‡ู
ุฅูุฐุง ุฐูŽูˆูŠ ุนูˆุฏูู‡ู ููŠ ุงู„ูƒูŽูู‘ู ู…ูŽุฑุฌูˆุนู

10. So live in peace and devote yourself to the literati
O you who unite the people of merit

ูกู . ููŽุงูุณู„ูŽู… ูˆูŽุนูุด ู„ูุจูŽู†ูŠ ุงู„ุขุฏุงุจู ู‚ุงุทูุจูŽุฉู‹
ูŠุง ู…ูŽู† ุจูู‡ู ุดูŽู…ู„ู ุฃูŽู‡ู„ู ุงู„ููŽุถู„ู ู…ูŽุฌู…ูˆุนู

11. If sorrow has been your companion when we parted
You are not the first youth to be distressed by farewell

ูกูก. ุฅูู† ูƒุงู†ูŽ ุฑุงุนูŽูƒูŽ ุญูุฒู†ูŒ ูŠูŽูˆู…ูŽ ููุฑู‚ูŽุชูู†ุง
ููŽู„ูŽุณุชูŽ ุฃูŽูˆู‘ูŽู„ูŽ ุตูŽุจู‘ู ุจูุงู„ุฃูŽุณู‰ ุฑูŠุนุง