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I wish the rule were mine, five years or ten

وليت الحكم خمسا وهي خمس

1. I wish the rule were mine, five years or ten
In youth and prime of vigor among men.

١. وَلِيتُ الْحُكْمَ خَمْساً وهْيَ خُمْسٌ
لِعُمْرِي والصِّبا في الْعُنْفُوانِ

2. Then foes had never brought my state to naught
Nor enemies declared, "See, he is distraught!"

٢. فَلَمْ يَضَعِ الأَعادِي قَدْرَ شاني
وَلاَ قالُوا فُلانٌ قَدْ رَشاني