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My roots and branches both abandoned me,

أصلي وفرعي فارقاني معا

1. My roots and branches both abandoned me,
And I was ripped up from their grasp.

١. أصلي وفَرعي فارقاني معاً
واجتُثَّ من حبَليهما حَبلي

2. For how can a branch endure on its bough,
When the branch and root are gone?

٢. فما بقاءُ الغُصنِ في ساقهِ
بعدَ ذهاب الفَرعِ والأصلِ