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O eloquent one, your poem has come to me

ูŠุง ุจู„ูŠุบุง ุฃุชู‰ ู‚ุฑูŠุถูƒ ูŠู‡ู…ูŠ

1. O eloquent one, your poem has come to me
My concern is a heavy sea heading towards the clouds

ูก. ูŠุง ุจู„ูŠุบุง ุฃุชู‰ ู‚ุฑูŠุถูƒ ูŠู‡ู…ูŠ
ู‡ู…ูŠ ุจุญุฑ ุฃุฒุฑู‰ ุจุตูˆุจ ุงู„ุบู…ุงุฆู…

2. We were saddened by her absence, then she came
The longing of a loving heart returns to the distracted

ูข. ุฃูˆุญุดุชู†ุง ุจูู‚ุฏู‡ุง ุซูู…ู‘ ุฌุงุกุช
ุบุจู‘ ุดูˆู‚ ุจูˆุจู„ ุฃู†ุณ ู„ู‡ุงุฆู…

3. She reminded us, and we did not forget, but
A young man may be brought back by what he knows

ูฃ. ุฐูƒุฑู‘ุชู†ุง ูˆู…ุง ู†ุณูŠู†ุง ูˆู„ูƒู†
ู‚ุฏ ูŠูุนุงุฏู ุงู„ูุชู‰ ุจู…ุง ู‡ููˆ ุนุงู„ู…

4. Your meeting has emphasized the actions of longing
Ascent may emphasize amulets

ูค. ุฃูƒุฏู‘ุช ููŠ ู„ู‚ุงูƒ ุฃูุนุงู„ ุดูˆู‚
ุฑูุจู‘ู…ุง ุฃูƒุฏู‘ ุงู„ุฑู‘ูู‚ู‰ ุจุงู„ุชู‘ู…ุงุฆู…

5. A piece I do not sleep to
No protector has ever woven around its composition

ูฅ. ู‚ุทุนุฉ ุชุฐุนู†ู ู„ุงุฃู†ุงู… ุฅู„ูŠู‡ุง
ู„ู… ูŠุญู… ุญูˆู„ ู†ุณุฌู‡ุง ู‚ุทู‘ ุญุงุฆู…

6. O literary man, you have contained eloquent poetry
And a tongue that surpasses the scent of perfume

ูฆ. ูŠุง ุฃุฏูŠุจุง ุญูˆูŠุช ู†ุธู…ุง ุจู„ูŠุบุง
ูˆู„ุณุงู†ุง ูŠููˆู‚ู ู…ุณูƒ ุงู„ู„ุทู‘ุงุฆู…

7. They asked me who are you infatuated with
I said the prominent name is pleasing

ูง. ุณุงุฆู„ูˆู†ูŠ ู…ู† ุงู„ู‘ุฐูŠ ุฃู†ุช ููŠู‡
ู‡ุงุฆู…ูŒ ู‚ูู„ุชู ุธุงู‡ุฑู ุงู„ุงุณู… ุฑุงุฆู…

8. So they asked why is there meaning in it
You compose praise, I said itโ€™s a fitting saying

ูจ. ูุฃุฌุงุจูˆุง ุฅู„ุงู… ููŠู‡ ู…ูุนู†ู‘ู‰
ุชู†ุณุฌู ุงู„ู…ุฏุญ ู‚ูู„ุชู ู‚ูˆู„ ู…ูู„ุงุฆู…

9. It was enough to protect me from companions
With insights that bloom like chamomile

ูฉ. ู‚ุฏ ูƒูุงู†ูŠ ุนู† ุงู„ุฃูˆุงุฏู… ุทูุฑู‘ุง
ุจู†ูƒุงุช ุชูุฒุฑูŠ ุจุฒู‡ุฑ ุงู„ูƒู…ุงุฆู…

10. And greetings from the one called
Soothing bird teaching the son of Adam

ูกู . ูˆุณู„ุงู… ุจูŠุฏูŠู‡ ู…ู† ู‡ููˆ ูŠูุฏุนู‰
ุจุงุฆู… ุทูŠุฑ ู…ูุนู„ู…ู‘ ู„ุงุจู† ุขุฏู