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I wrote to him "guest" upon his door

كتبت له ضيفا على باب داره

1. I wrote to him "guest" upon his door
But he misread it as "summer" and drew his sword

١. كتبتُ لهُ ضيفاً على باب داره
فصحّفهُ صيفا وبادر بالسّيف

2. So I said to him "good" but he thought
We mentioned "bread" to him, and he died of fear

٢. فقلتُ لهُ خيرا فظنّ بأننا
ذكرنا لهُ خُبزاً فمات من الخوف