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How excellent and beautiful is what she took, if only

ู‡ู†ูŠุฆุง ู…ุฑูŠุฆุง ู…ุง ุฃุฎุฐุช ูˆู„ูŠุชู†ูŠ

1. How excellent and beautiful is what she took, if only
I could see her and give all my clothes every day

ูก. ู‡ูŽู†ูŠุฆุงู‹ ู…ูŽุฑูŠุฆุงู‹ ู…ุง ุฃูŽุฎูŽุฐุชู ูˆูŽู„ูŽูŠุชูŽู†ูŠ
ุฃูŽุฑุงู‡ุง ูˆูŽุฃูุนุทู‰ ูƒูู„ู‘ูŽ ูŠูŽูˆู…ู ุซููŠุงุจููŠุง

2. If only she knew that I am her friend
Yet I am the one crying over her with my weeping

ูข. ูˆูŽูŠุง ู„ูŽูŠุชูŽู‡ุง ุชูŽุฏุฑูŠ ุจูุฃูŽู†ู‘ูŠ ุฎูŽู„ูŠู„ูู‡ุง
ูˆูŽุฅูู†ู‘ูŠ ุฃูŽู†ุง ุงู„ุจุงูƒูŠ ุนูŽู„ูŽูŠู‡ุง ุจููƒุงุฆููŠุง

3. My dear, if you could see me and her family with me
I have a presence, though you left me lonely

ูฃ. ุฎูŽู„ูŠู„ูŽูŠู‘ูŽ ู„ูŽูˆ ุฃูŽุจุตูŽุฑุชูู…ุงู†ูŠ ูˆูŽุฃูŽู‡ู„ูู‡ุง
ู„ูŽุฏูŽูŠู‘ูŽ ุญูุถูˆุฑูŒ ุฎูู„ุชูู…ุงู†ูŠ ุณูŽูˆุงุฆููŠุง

4. When I entered the neighborhood I left my fire ablaze
With a chain that I pull along, dragging my cloak

ูค. ูˆูŽู„ูŽู…ู‘ุง ุฏูŽุฎูŽู„ุชู ุงู„ุญูŽูŠู‘ูŽ ุฎูŽู„ู‘ูŽูุชู ู…ูˆู‚ูุฏูŠ
ุจูุณูู„ุณูู„ูŽุฉู ุฃูŽุณุนู‰ ุฃูŽุฌูุฑู‘ู ุฑูุฏุงุฆููŠุง

5. I lean my head for a while as an old woman
Leads me begging, walking ahead of me

ูฅ. ุฃูŽู…ูŠู„ู ุจูุฑูŽุฃุณูŠ ุณุงุนูŽุฉู‹ ูˆูŽุชูŽู‚ูˆุฏูู†ูŠ
ุนูŽุฌูˆุฒูŒ ู…ูู†ูŽ ุงู„ุณูุคุงู„ู ุชูŽุณุนู‰ ุฃูŽู…ุงู…ููŠุง

6. The boys stared at me and gathered around
They set the dogs on me snarling

ูฆ. ูˆูŽู‚ูŽุฏ ุฃูŽุญุฏูŽู‚ูŽ ุงู„ุตูุจูŠุงู†ู ุจูŠ ูˆูŽุชูŽุฌูŽู…ู‘ูŽุนูˆุง
ุนูŽู„ูŽูŠู‘ูŽ ูˆูŽุดูŽุฏู‘ูˆุง ุจูุงู„ูƒูู„ุงุจู ุถูŽูˆุงุฑููŠุง

7. I looked at Layla and could not hold back tears
I said โ€œHave mercy on my weakness and what has befallen meโ€

ูง. ู†ูŽุธูŽุฑุชู ุฅูู„ู‰ ู„ูŽูŠู„ู‰ ููŽู„ูŽู… ุฃูŽู…ู„ููƒู ุงู„ุจููƒุง
ููŽู‚ูู„ุชู ุงูุฑุญูŽู…ูˆุง ุถูŽุนููŠ ูˆูŽุดูุฏู‘ูŽุฉูŽ ู…ุง ุจููŠุง

8. She stood up briskly and the women around her
Walked towards me when they heard my crying

ูจ. ููŽู‚ุงู…ูŽุช ู‡ูŽุจูˆุจุงู‹ ูˆูŽุงู„ู†ูุณุงุกู ู…ูู†ูŽ ุงูŽุฌู„ูู‡ุง
ุชูŽู…ูŽุดู‘ูŽูŠู†ูŽ ู†ูŽุญูˆูŠ ุฅูุฐ ุณูŽู…ูุนู†ูŽ ุจููƒุงุฆููŠุง

9. You who torment me, if not for you I would not be a beggar
Wandering from door to door naked among the people

ูฉ. ู…ูุนูŽุฐู‘ูุจูŽุชูŠ ู„ูŽูˆู„ุงูƒู ู…ุง ูƒูู†ุชู ุณุงุฆูู„ุงู‹
ุฃูŽุฏูˆุฑู ุนูŽู„ู‰ ุงู„ุฃูŽุจูˆุงุจู ููŠ ุงู„ู†ุงุณู ุนุงุฑููŠุง

10. And a woman said โ€œHave mercy on his youthโ€
I said โ€œYes, have mercy on my youthโ€

ูกู . ูˆูŽู‚ุงุฆูู„ูŽุฉู ูˆุงุฑูŽุญู…ูŽุฉู‹ ู„ูุดูŽุจุงุจูู‡ู
ููŽู‚ูู„ุชู ุฃูŽุฌูŽู„ ูˆุงุฑูŽุญู…ูŽุฉู‹ ู„ูุดูŽุจุงุจููŠุง

11. โ€œWhat has happened, why does he walk bent over weeping?โ€
I said โ€œI only weep for her, not for what has happened to meโ€

ูกูก. ุฃูŽุตุงุญูุจูŽุฉูŽ ุงู„ู…ูุณูƒูŠู†ู ู…ุงุฐุง ุฃูŽุตุงุจูŽู‡ู
ูˆูŽู…ุง ุจุงู„ูู‡ู ูŠูŽู…ุดูŠ ุงู„ูˆูŽุฌู‰ ู…ูุชูŽู†ุงู‡ููŠุง

12. Laylaโ€™s cousins, who do you have but me?
I will sacrifice my life for Layla

ูกูข. ูˆูŽู…ุง ุจุงู„ูู‡ู ูŠูŽุจูƒูŠ ููŽู‚ุงู„ูŽุช ู„ูู…ุง ุจูู‡ู
ุฃูŽู„ุง ุฅูู†ู‘ูŽู…ุง ุฃูŽุจูƒูŠ ู„ูŽู‡ุง ู„ุง ู„ูู…ุง ุจููŠุง

13. The slanderers have only increased my patience
And the critics have only increased my enemies

ูกูฃ. ุจูŽู†ูŠ ุนูŽู…ู‘ู ู„ูŽูŠู„ู‰ ู…ูŽู† ู„ูŽูƒูู… ุบูŽูŠุฑูŽ ุฃูŽู†ู‘ูŽู†ูŠ
ู…ูุฌูŠุฏูŒ ู„ูู„ูŽูŠู„ู‰ ุนูู…ุฑูู‡ุง ู…ูู† ุญูŽูŠุงุชููŠุง

14. O Laylaโ€™s family, may God give you many more like her
So you may be generous to me with them

ูกูค. ููŽู…ุง ุฒุงุฏูŽู†ูŠ ุงู„ูˆุงุดูˆู†ูŽ ุฅูู„ู‘ุง ุตูŽุจุงุจูŽุฉู‹
ูˆูŽู…ุง ุฒุงุฏูŽู†ูŠ ุงู„ู†ุงู‡ูˆู†ูŽ ุฅูู„ู‘ุง ุฃูŽุนุงุฏููŠุง

15. I have not touched the ground without remembering her
Else I find her scent on my clothes

ูกูฅ. ููŽูŠุง ุฃูŽู‡ู„ูŽ ู„ูŽูŠู„ู‰ ูƒูŽุซู‘ูŽุฑูŽ ุงู„ู„ูŽู‡ู ููŠูƒูู…ู
ู…ูู†ูŽ ุงูŽู…ุซุงู„ูู‡ุง ุญูŽุชู‘ู‰ ุชูŽุฌูˆุฏูˆุง ุจูู‡ุง ู„ููŠุง

ูกูฆ. ููŽู…ุง ู…ูŽุณู‘ูŽ ุฌูŽู†ุจูŠ ุงู„ุฃูŽุฑุถูŽ ุญูŽุชู‘ู‰ ุฐูŽูƒูŽุฑุชูู‡ุง
ูˆูŽุฅูู„ู‘ุง ูˆูŽุฌูŽุฏุชู ุฑูŠุญูŽู‡ุง ููŠ ุซููŠุงุจููŠุง