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And what grieved me was that, the day she departed

ومما شجاني أنها يوم ودعت

1. And what grieved me was that, the day she departed
She turned away while the tears in my eyes wandered, bewildered,

١. وَمِمّا شَجاني أَنَّها يَومَ وَدَّعَت
تَوَلَّت وَماءُ العَينِ في الجَفنِ حائِرُ

2. But when from afar she cast a glance back
At me, my eyelids instantly imprisoned them.

٢. فَلَمّا أَعادَت مِن بَعيدٍ بِنَظرَةٍ
إِلَيَّ اِلتِفاتاً أَسلَمَتهُ المَحاجِرُ