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You drew me close until, when you had tempted me

وأدنيتني حتى إذا ما فتنتني

1. You drew me close until, when you had tempted me
With words that make virtue easy, smooth the brows,

١. وَأَدنَيتِني حَتّى إِذا ما فَتَنتِني
بِقَولٍ يَحِلُّ العَصمَ سَهلَ الأَباطِحِ

2. You turned from me, though I had no recourse,
And left what you had left twixt ribs and spine.

٢. تَجافَيتِ عَنّي حينَ لا لِيَ حيلَةٌ
وَغادَرتِ ما غادَرتِ بَينَ الجَوانِحِ

3. So Layla's love is not soon lost, her bond
Not snapped when mourners turn their backs and go.

٣. فَما حُبُّ لَيلى بِالوَشيكِ اِنقِطاعُهُ
وَلا بِالمُؤَدّى يَومَ رَدِّ المَنائِحِ