Feedback

What was my fault against Al-Farazdaq that he satirized,

ู…ุง ูƒุงู† ุฐู†ุจูŠ ููŠ ุงู„ูุฑุฒุฏู‚ ุฃู† ู‡ุฌุง

1. What was my fault against Al-Farazdaq that he satirized,
So I satirized him and he chose the finest speech.

ูก. ู…ุง ูƒุงู†ูŽ ุฐูŽู†ุจูŠ ููŠ ุงู„ููŽุฑูŽุฒุฏูŽู‚ู ุฃูŽู† ู‡ูŽุฌุง
ููŽู‡ูŽุฌูŽูˆุชูŽู‡ู ููŽุชูŽุฎูŽูŠู‘ูŽุฑูŽ ุงู„ุฃูŽู…ุซุงู„ุง

2. We both arose early, each volunteering,
When the confederates desired combat.

ูข. ููŽุบูŽุฏูŽูˆุชูู…ุง ูˆูŽูƒูู„ุงูƒูู…ุง ู…ูŽุชูŽุจูŽุฑู‘ูุนูŒ
ู†ูŽุฏูŽุจูŽ ุงู„ู…ูŽูˆุงู„ูŠ ุฅูุฐ ุฃูŽุฑุงุฏูŽ ู†ูุถุงู„ุง

3. Al-Farazdaq called for Hajib, Utฤrid,
The two โ€˜Aqraโ€™s, Habฤซs and โ€˜Iqฤl.

ูฃ. ููŽุฏูŽุนุง ุงู„ููŽุฑูŽุฒุฏูŽู‚ ุญุงุฌูุจุง ูˆูŽุนูุทุงุฑูุฏุง
ูˆุงู„ุฃูŽู‚ุฑูŽุนูŽูŠู†ู ูˆูŽุญุงุจูุณุง ูˆูŽุนูู‚ุงู„ุง

4. While you called Qunnas, Al-Maโ€™ฤซd, Qarhad,
The abstainers, Khayแนญaf and Thimฤl.

ูค. ูˆูŽุฏูŽุนูŽูˆุชูŽ ู‚ูู†ู‘ูŽุฉูŽ ูˆูŽุงู„ู…ูŽุนูŠุฏ ูˆูŽู‚ูŽุฑู‡ูŽุฏุงู‹
ูˆูŽุงู„ู…ูุนุฑูุถูŠู†ู ูˆูŽุฎูŽูŠุทูŽูุง ูˆูŽุซูู…ุงู„ุง

5. Al-Farazdaq preceded in generosity and nobility,
While the son of Marฤgha enumerates ruins.

ูฅ. ุณูŽุจูŽู‚ูŽ ุงู„ููŽุฑูŽุฒุฏูŽู‚ู ุจูุงู„ู…ูŽูƒุงุฑูู…ู ูˆูŽุงู„ุนูู„ู‰
ูˆุงุจู†ู ุงู„ู…ูŽุฑุงุบูŽุฉู ูŠูŽู†ุนูŽุชู ุงู„ุฃูŽุทู„ุงู„ุง