مَحاسنbeauties أَبياتverses تَجلتshone forth بِنُورِهاwith their light
مَحاسن أَبيات تَجلت بِنُورِها
عَليَّupon me فَعجزيso my weakness لاnot يَقومsuffices بِشُكرِهاfor thanking them
عَليَّ فَعجزي لا يَقوم بِشُكرِها
The beauties of verses revealed themselves in their light
The beauties of verses shone forth with their light
to me—yet my inadequacy cannot suffice to thank them.
Upon me; my feeble powers cannot thank them enough.
صَبَوتI grew enamored لَهاof them لَماwhen رَأَيتI saw جَمالَهاtheir beauty
صَبَوت لَها لَما رَأَيت جَمالَها
وَعايَنتand I beheld نظمstringing الدرّthe pearls فيin عقدnecklace نَحرِهاtheir throat
وَعايَنت نظم الدرّ في عقد نَحرِها
I yearned for them when I saw their beauty
I grew enamored of them when I saw their beauty,
and beheld pearls arrayed in a necklace at their throat.
And beheld pearls strung in the necklace at their throat.
طَلاوةsweetness أَلفاظwords حَوَتهاthey contained them تَقولsays للto the
طَلاوة أَلفاظ حَوَتها تَقول لل
مَناظرdisputant (contextual reading) لاdo not تَهلكperish بواعرin the ruggedness of غُورهاtheir depths
مَناظر لا تَهلك بواعر غُورها
The sweetness of the words that hold them says to the—
The sweetness of the words they contain says to the
examiner: “Do not perish in their rugged depths.”
Disputant: “Do not perish in their rugged depths.”
فَدَيتكI ransom you نَفسيmy soul مِنwho (apparently intended) أَجدتyou excelled بِنَظمِهاin composing them
فَدَيتك نَفسي مِن أَجدت بِنَظمِها
فَلَولاكfor, without you لَمwould not تَضحَكhave laughed مَباسمsmiling mouths ثَغرِهاtheir lips
فَلَولاك لَم تَضحَك مَباسم ثَغرِها
My soul be your ransom, you who excelled in composing them;
I would ransom you with my soul, you who excelled in composing them;
were it not for you, their smiling lips would never have laughed.
For without you, their smiling lips would not have laughed.
يَعمّspreads عَلَيناover us مِنكَfrom you طيّبُsweetness نَفحهاtheir wafting fragrance
يَعمّ عَلَينا مِنكَ طيّبُ نَفحها
وَنَقصرand we fall short عَنof إِدراكgrasping زاهرradiant عطرهاtheir perfume
وَنَقصر عَن إِدراك زاهر عطرها
From you, their sweet breath wafts over us,
From you, their sweet fragrance spreads over us,
while we fall short of grasping the splendor of their perfume.
And we fall short of grasping their radiant perfume.
سَمَتthey soared فيin سَماءsky المَجدglory عجباًhow wondrous! لِأَنَّهاfor they
سَمَت في سَماء المَجد عجباً لِأَنَّها
إِذاwhenever ذكرتthey are mentioned ماتَdies الحَسودthe envious man لِذكرِهاat their mention
إِذا ذكرت ماتَ الحَسود لِذكرِها
They rose wondrously in glory’s sky, because they—
They soared in glory’s sky—how wondrous!—for
when mentioned—make the envious die at their mention.
Whenever they are mentioned, the envious man dies at their mention.
لَكَyours الفَخرthe glory أَنتَyou السَيدthe master الماجدthe illustrious الَّذيwho
لَكَ الفَخر أَنتَ السَيد الماجد الَّذي
بَديعwondrous المَعانيmeanings أَنتَyou كاشفrevealer سرهاtheir secret
بَديع المَعاني أَنتَ كاشف سرها
Yours is the glory: you, the noble, illustrious master who—
Yours is the glory; you are the illustrious master who
fashion wondrous meanings and reveal their secret.
Unveils the secret of wondrous meanings.
أَتيتyou brought بِأَبياتwith verses تَعاظمgrew immense شَأنُهاtheir stature
أَتيت بِأَبيات تَعاظم شَأنُها
وَعَزتand they grew exalted وَقَدand indeed زادَتincreased جَلالةmajesty قَدرِهاtheir rank
وَعَزت وَقَد زادَت جَلالة قَدرِها
You brought forth verses whose stature grew immense;
You brought forth verses whose stature grew immense,
they became mighty, and the majesty of their worth increased.
And they grew exalted, their rank’s majesty having increased.
مَلَكتَyou took possession of بِهاthrough them رقيmy servitude وَصرتُand I became بِماbecause of what لَهاthey have
مَلَكتَ بِها رقي وَصرتُ بِما لَها
عليّtoward me مِنof الإفضالgenerosity فيin قَيدchains أَسرِهاcaptivity to them
عليّ مِن الإفضال في قَيد أَسرِها
Through them you made me your thrall; and through the favor they have—
Through them you made me your slave, and I became, owing to their
shown me, I became bound in the fetters of their captivity.
Bounty toward me, bound in the chains of captivity to them.
هَمَمتَyou aspired إِلىtoward العَلياthe heights بِهمةwith the resolve of سابقa frontrunner
هَمَمتَ إِلى العَليا بِهمة سابق
وَصارَتand became بِكَthrough you العَلياءthe heights تَزهوexultant بِفخرهاin their glory
وَصارَت بِكَ العَلياء تَزهو بِفخرها
You aimed for the heights with a forerunner’s resolve,
You aspired to the heights with a frontrunner’s resolve,
and through you, high glory itself came to exult in its pride.
And through you, the heights came to exult in their glory.
Sol 6.1