هبنيsuppose that I أطيعI obey ملامthe reproaches of الكاشحينthe spiteful foes ولاand do not
هبني أطيع ملام الكاشحين ولا
أعصىI disobey الوشاةthe slanderers ولاand do not أرعىI observe الذيwhat يجبis obligatory
أعصى الوشاة ولا أرعى الذي يجب
Suppose I heed the reproaches of spiteful foes and do not
defy the slanderers, nor observe what duty demands:
أكنتwould I be? أصغيI listen لشعرto poetry وزنهits meter خطأfaulty
أكنت أصغي لشعر وزنه خطأ
وقدand already ترادفfollowed in succession فيهwithin it اللحنgrammatical error والكذبand falsehood
وقد ترادف فيه اللحن والكذب
would I listen to verse whose meter is faulty,
when grammatical error and falsehood have piled up within it?
فالوزنfor the meter منكسرٌbroken والخفضand the genitive منتصبset in the accusative
فالوزن منكسرٌ والخفض منتصب
واللفظand the wording غثfeeble ومعنىand the meaning of اللفظthe wording منقلبinverted
واللفظ غث ومعنى اللفظ منقلب
For the meter is broken, and the genitive stands in the accusative;
and the wording is feeble, its meaning turned upside down.
لوif كنتyou were تسطيعyou are able أخطاءerrors بخامسةin a fifth respect
لو كنت تسطيع أخطاء بخامسة
أخطأتyou would have erred لكنbut عليكincumbent on you الجهدeffort والطلبand striving
أخطأت لكن عليك الجهد والطلب
If you could make errors in a fifth respect,
you would have erred—but you must labor and strive.
هذهthese المعانيmeanings الكتبخيal-Katbakhi (uncertain name) ارتضاكdeemed you fit لهاfor them
هذه المعاني الكتبخي ارتضاك لها
قلsay شعرتI composed verse وكانتand they were قبلformerly تحتلبbeing milked
قل شعرت وكانت قبل تحتلب
Al-Katbakhi deemed you fit for these meanings.
Say, 'I have composed verse'—yet before, they were milked.
هبsuppose العروضprosody تساهلناwe were lenient عليكwith you بهconcerning it
هب العروض تساهلنا عليك به
فأيthen what نحوٍgrammar بهذاwithin this العقلmind يحتجبlies hidden
فأي نحوٍ بهذا العقل يحتجب
Suppose we were lenient with you over prosody:
then what grammar lies hidden within this mind?
تطهرpurify yourself الآنnow منof ذاthis الشعرpoetry مغتسلاًby bathing
تطهر الآن من ذا الشعر مغتسلاً
كماjust as تطهرcleanses himself منof أدرانهhis stains الجنبone in major ritual impurity
كما تطهر من أدرانه الجنب
Purify yourself now of this poetry by bathing,
as one ritually impure cleanses himself of his stains.
Sol 6.1