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When a line appeared on my tormentor's cheek

ولما بدا خط بخد معذبي

1. When a line appeared on my tormentor's cheek
Like night's darkness amid day's radiance

١. وَلَمّا بَدا خَطٌّ بِخَدِّ مُعَذِّبي
كَظُلمَةِ لَيلٍ في ضِياءِ نَهارِ

2. I cast off my excuse for loving him and have not ceased
To be a wretch excusing new torment

٢. خَلَعتُ عِذاري في هَواهُ وَلَم أَزَل
خَليعَ عِذارٍ في جَديدِ عِذارِ