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I have with you a religion, but does it have

لي عندكم دين ولكن هل له

1. I have with you a religion, but does it have
A seeker, while my infatuated heart pines?

١. لي عِندَكُم دَينٌ وَلَكِن هَل لَهُ
مِن طالِبٍ وَفُؤاديَ المَوهونُ

2. It's as if I were an Alif and Lam in love
And your tryst were naught but a Nunation sign

٢. فَكَأَنَّني أَلِفٌ وَلامٌ في الهَوى
وَكَأَنَّ مَوعِدَ وَصلِكُم تَنوينُ