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The free manโ€™s poem was not complete

ู…ุง ูƒุงู† ูŠูƒู…ู„ ุญุฑ ุฐุง ุงู„ุฏ

1. The free manโ€™s poem was not complete
Until his mantle grew in size

ูก. ู…ุง ูƒุงู†ูŽ ูŠูŽูƒู…ูู„ู ุญูุฑู‘ูŽ ุฐุง ุงู„ุฏ
ุฏูŠูˆุงู†ู ุญูŽุชู‘ู‰ ุงูุฒุฏุงุฏูŽ ู‚ูุจู‘ูŽู‡

2. So it seems I stumbled in it
And over me lies its dome

ูข. ููŽูƒูŽุฃูŽู†ู‘ูŽู†ูŠ ููŠู‡ู ุฎูŽุฑูˆ
ู ุดูˆู‰ู‹ ูˆูŽู…ูู† ููŽูˆู‚ูŠ ู…ููƒูŽุจู‘ูŽู‡