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My gratitude to the one I loved and longed for

شكري لمن أحببته وهويته

1. My gratitude to the one I loved and longed for
Like a thirsty man's gratitude for fresh spring water

١. شُكْري لمن أَحْبَبْتُه وهَوِيتُهُ
شُكُرُ الغَليل لعذْبِ ماءِ المَشْرَعِ

2. He shows and hides out of modesty before others
Except with me, chastely, except by my side

٢. يُبدي ويَكْتُمُ للأَنامِ تَصَوُّناً
إِلاَّ عَليَّ وعفَّةً إِلاَّ مَعِي

3. So if he sees anyone else, he's a stealthy lion
And if alone with me, a roaring zealous lion

٣. فإِذا رأَى غَيْرِي فليث خِفْيةً
وإِذا خَلَوْتُ بِهِ فظبيُ الأَجْرَع

4. And if the lovers complain of shedding their tears
I thank him more than an army of tears

٤. وإِذا اشْتكَى العُشَّاقُ سكْب دمُوعِهِم
أَصبحتُ أَشْكُرُ مِنْهُ جَيْشَ الأَدْمُع

5. He protects everything masculine from him
And everything veiled is ransomed by him

٥. فَوَقَى المذَكَّرُ مِنْهُ كلَّ مُؤَنَّث
وفَدَى المُعَمَّمُ مِنْهُ كلَّ مقَنَّع