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I brought it to my thirsty lips,

أوردته قبلي على عطش

1. I brought it to my thirsty lips,
Not expecting it would pierce my breast,

١. أَوردته قُبَلي على عَطَشٍ
مِنْهَا ولَمْ أَعْزِم على الصَّدَر

2. Hoping with many kisses and caresses
I could make the downy hair thicken and grow.

٢. أَرجو بِكَثْرَةِ لَثْمِ وجْنَتِه
أَنِّي أَسدُّ منابتَ الشَّعَرِ