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I promised my kiss to one who reproached me,

أسلفت تقبيلي لسالفتيه

1. I promised my kiss to one who reproached me,
When his blame occupied my lips.

١. أَسْلَفْتُ تَقْبِيلي لسالِفتيهِ
إِذ عَتْبُه لي شاغِلٌ شفتيْهِ

2. He thought I was sated with water,
Yet I was thirstier than I'd been for him.

٢. ويظن أَنِّي قد رَويت من الظما
وأَكونُ أَظْمى مَا أَكُون إِليْهِ

3. He thought me cruel from my intense embrace,
Yet I was more tender than I'd been with him.

٣. ويظنني من فَرْطِ ضَمِّي قاسِياً
وأَكونُ أَحْنى ما أَكونُ عليه

4. Oh, if only I knew, for the one hurt by his acts,
Who guided his eyes to my eyes!

٤. يا ليت شِعْري للمُصَابِ بِفِعْلِه
مَنْ دَلَّ عَيْنيْه على عَيْنيْهِ