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I spoke to him and he blushed with embarrassment

كلمته فاصفر من خجل

1. I spoke to him and he blushed with embarrassment
Until he was covered in bright green leaves

١. كَلَّمتُهُ فَاصفَرَّ مِن خَجَلٍ
حَتَّى اكتَسَى بِالعَسجَدِ الوَرِقُ

2. And I asked to kiss his palm
But he refused and said, I fear I'll catch fire

٢. وَسَألتُهُ تَقبِيلَ رَاحَتِهِ
فَأبَى وقَالَ أخَافُ أحتَرِقُ

3. Until my sigh betrayed my hope
Indeed the wretch with his saliva ignited

٣. حتَّى زَفِيرِي عَاقَ عِن أمَلِي
إِنَّ الشَّقِيَّ بِرِيقِهِ شَرِقُ