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I asked friends who visited them at dawn

قلت لصحب زارهم شادن

1. I asked friends who visited them at dawn
As though he were a branch swaying

١. قلت لصحب زارهم شادنٌ
كأنه الغصن إذا ماسا

2. Did he pass the cup around and they said yes
Yet no cup when he who sipped has sipped

٢. هل طاف بالكأس فقالوا نعم
وكاس لما شرب الكاسا