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I spent my treasure of praises on his mouth

أنفقت كنز مدائحي في ثغره

1. I spent my treasure of praises on his mouth
And gathered in it every fleeting meaning

١. أنفقت كنز مدائحي في ثغره
وجمعت فيه كل معنى شارد

2. And I asked him for reward a kiss
But he refused and my weaving went in vain

٢. وطلبتُ منه جزاء ذلك قبلةً
فأبى وراح تغزلي في البارد