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How many tender ties I've sacrificed for her

أفدى مهاة كم قطعت بوصلها

1. How many tender ties I've sacrificed for her
Whose life thereafter was but tears and blood

١. أفدى مهاةً كم قطعتُ بوصلها
عيشاً جرى من بعده دمعي دما

2. She turned aside and leaned towards estrangement
After devotion, and forgot, I think, pledges sworn when passion was aflame

٢. صدت ومالت للجفا بعد الوفا
وأظنها نسيت عهوداً بالحمى