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I swear I have not embellished the dove's paper

أقسمت ما سجعت ورق الحمائم في

1. I swear I have not embellished the dove's paper
In a garden with anything like her shoulders or clearness of voice

١. أقسمت ما سجعت ورق الحمائم في
روض على مثل عطفيها ولا صدحت

2. And whenever she straightens up with a tilt,
I see above the beauty of the branch she leans

٢. وكلما اعتدلت بالميل قامتها
رأيتها فوق حسن الغصن قد رجحت

3. Nor has her cheek been adorned by a pearl’s sweat
Rather she is a rose moistened by dew

٣. وما اكتسى خدها من لؤلؤٍ عرقاً
لكنها وردةٌ بالطل قد رشحت