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I look upon the trace of ink on his cheek

أنظر إلى أثر المداد بخده

1. I look upon the trace of ink on his cheek
Like the violet of the garden tinged with rose

١. أُنظرْ إلى أثَرِ المدادِ بخدِّهِ
كبنفسج الروضِ المشوبِ بورده

2. His dimples did not miss a single dot
Nor did his height miss a single curve

٢. ما أخطأتْ نوناته من صُدْغِهِ
شيئاً ولا ألِفاتُهُ من قده

3. His fingers cast upon his pens
You'd think his palms kneaded dough

٣. ألقتْ أناملُهُ على أقلامه
شَبَهاً أراك فرندها كفرنده

4. And as though his breath was from his hair
And as though his parchment was from his cheek

٤. وكأنما أنفاسُهُ من شعره
وكأنما قِرْطاسُهُ من خده

5. He would not have turned away from me deliberately
If not for the teacher, I'd not be struck by his rejection

٥. ما صدَّ عني حين صدَّ تعمداً
لولا المعلمُ ما رُمِيتُ بصَدِّه