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I would give my life for she who wrote to me with her fingers

أفدي التي كتبت إلي بنانها

1. I would give my life for she who wrote to me with her fingers
On the lute - how tiring for the writers!

١. أفدي التي كتبت إلي بنانها
في العود ما أعيا على الكتّاب

2. She wrote without any pen but her strings
So it's seen without any pen but the plectrum

٢. كتبت ولا خط سوى أوتارها
فيرى ولا قلم سوى المضراب

3. I read what she wrote by listening closely
And told my eyes to reply to her

٣. فقرأت ما كتبت بسمعي مطرقاً
وأمرت طرفي أن يرد جوابي