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My critics in describing Abbas

ู…ุคู†ุจูŠ ููŠ ูˆุตู ุนุจุงุณ

1. My critics in describing Abbas
You described the best of people in him

ูก. ู…ูุคู†ู‘ูุจูŠ ููŠ ูˆูŽุตู’ูู ุนุจู‘ุงุณู
ุฃู†ู‘ูŽุจุชูŽ ููŠู‡ ุฃูˆุตููŽ ุงู„ู†ุงุณ

2. The sun, the palm tree and whatโ€™s between them
And this is a branch of Aas

ูข. ุงู„ุดู…ุณู ูˆุงู„ุฏู‘ูุนุตู ูˆู…ุง ุจูŠู†ูŽ ุฐุง
ูˆู‡ุฐู‡ ุบุตู†ูŒ ู…ู† ุงู„ุขุณ

3. His lowering of his eyelids suffices over kohl
And his glance suffices over a cup

ูฃ. ูŠูุบู’ู†ูŠ ุนู† ุงู„ุฑู‘ูŽุงู…ูุดู’ู†ู ุฅูุทุฑุงู‚ูู‡ู
ูˆุทูŽุฑู’ููู‡ู ูŠูุบู†ูŠ ุนู† ุงู„ูƒุงุณ

4. O Abbas, in valor you are to me
Nothing but Abbas ibn Mardas

ูค. ู…ุง ูƒู†ุชูŽ ูŠุง ุนุจู‘ูŽุงุณู ููŠ ุงู„ูุชูƒู ุจูŠ
ุฅู„ุงู‘ูŽ ูƒุนุจู‘ูŽุงุณู ุจู†ู ู…ุฑุฏุงุณ