ولماand when بداappeared للعينto the eye ميزانُmeter شعركمyour verse
ولما بدا للعين ميزانُ شعركم
وأعجبهاand amazed it إذاwhen ماemphatic particle رأتit saw فيهin it منof شينblemish
وأعجبها إذا ما رأت فيه من شين
And when the meter of your verse appeared to the eye,
When the scale of your poetry appeared to my eyes
And amazed it when it saw a blemish therein,
And pleased them whenever they saw therein any defect
سألتI asked فؤاديmy heart هلwhether ترىyou see خللاa flaw بهin it
سألت فؤادي هل ترى خللا به
فقالso it said ليto me الميزانُthe meter يظهرُbecomes apparent بالعينby the eye
فقال لي الميزانُ يظهرُ بالعين
I asked my heart, “Do you see a flaw in it?”
I asked my heart: "Do you see any fault with it?"
It said to me, “The meter is revealed by the eye.”
It said to me: "The scale appears through the eyes."
Sol 6.1