أكثَرتَyou have multiplied عذلكَyour reproach لوْif only وجدْتَyou had found مُطيعَاsomeone obedient
أكثَرتَ عذلكَ لوْ وجدْتَ مُطيعَا
ونصحْتَand you advised جهدَكَwith all your effort لَوif only وجدتَyou had found سَميعاsomeone who listens
ونصحْتَ جهدَكَ لَو وجدتَ سَميعا
You have lavished your reproaches—if only you had found someone obedient!
You blame me more, had you found me obedient,
And offered counsel with all your might—if only you had found someone who would listen!
And you advise me, had you found me listening,
هَيّجتَyou stirred up فيin قلبيmy heart الجريحِwounded بَلاَturmoil (first word-fragment) بِلاًturmoil (second word-fragment)
هَيّجتَ في قلبي الجريحِ بَلاَ بِلاً
وأَفَضْتَand you made flow منfrom جفنيmy eyelid القريحsore دموعاtears
وأَفَضْتَ من جفني القريح دموعا
You stirred turmoil in my wounded heart,
You provoke wounds in my broken heart without cause,
And made tears stream from my sore eyelid.
And you make tears flow from my eyelids.
وقرعتَand you struck منِّيof mine بالملامةwith reproach مسمعاًan ear
وقرعتَ منِّي بالملامة مسمعاً
لاnot يسمعhears التأنيبَrebuke والتقريعاand scolding
لا يسمع التأنيبَ والتقريعا
And hammered at my ear with reproach,
You knock on me with reproach, on unhearing ears,
An ear that hears neither rebuke nor scolding.
That do not hear rebuke and reprimand.
قُلْsay لِلّذيto the one who هجرforsook المنازلthe dwellings والرُّبىand the hills
قُلْ لِلّذي هجر المنازل والرُّبى
واختطّand he marked out as his dwelling أفئدةًhearts لناof ours وضلوعاand ribs
واختطّ أفئدةً لنا وضلوعا
Say to the one who forsook the dwellings and hills,
Say to the one who deserted homes and meadows,
And marked out our hearts and ribs as his abode:
And intended hearts for us and ribs.
أدَرَىdo they know? العواذلُthe reproachers أنّنيthat I بملامِهمthrough their blame
أدَرَى العواذلُ أنّني بملامِهم
أزدادI grow فيكَfor you صبابةًlonging وولُوعاand ardor
أزداد فيكَ صبابةً وولُوعا
Do the reproachers know that, through their blame,
The censurers know that by reproaching me,
I grow in longing and ardor for you?
I only increase in love and yearning for you.
دعهمleave them فلوfor if نظروكthey looked at you أوَّلfirst نظرةٍa glance
دعهم فلو نظروك أوَّل نظرةٍ
كُناwe would have اشتركناwe shared فيin هواكlove for you جميعاall together
كُنا اشتركنا في هواك جميعا
Leave them be—for had they cast their first glance at you,
Leave them be, for if they saw you once,
We would all have shared in loving you.
We would have all shared love for you.
Sol 6.1