1. أراك وصفت الروضَ والدَّوحُ واجمٌ

    وزدتَ لما عاينتَ من خجلِ الوردِ

    I see you have described the garden, while the great trees stand silent;

    And added more at the sight of the roses' blush.

  2. وأقسمُ لولاه ولولا غصونهُ

    لكان بلا خدِّ بديعٍ ولا قدِ

    And I swear, but for the rose and the garden's boughs,

    It would have neither a lovely cheek nor a figure.

  3. وفي الروض نقصٌ واضحٌ لك نقدهُ

    وأنت بصيرٌ ما علمتك بالنقد

    And the garden has an obvious flaw for you to criticize,

    And you are, as I have known you, discerning in criticism:

  4. فنرجسهُ الغضُّ النَّدي طرف مدنفٍ

    ومنثورهُ المنظومُ كفٌ بلا زند

    For its tender, dewy narcissus is an invalid's eye,

    And its neatly arrayed stock-flowers are a hand without a forearm.