وعدتَyou promised فلماthen when أنthat (linking particle) أردتُI sought نجاحَهits fulfillment
وعدتَ فلما أن أردتُ نجاحَه
رأيتُI found مكانَthe place of النجمthe star نunclear fragment; likely 'than' ذاكَthat أقرباnearer
رأيتُ مكانَ النجم ن ذاكَ أقربا
You promised; then, when I sought its fulfillment,
You promised, but when I wanted its success
I found the star’s place nearer [than] that.
I saw in place of the star something closer
فلوfor if كنتَyou were حراًnoble ماnot مَطلتَyou procrastinated بموعدٍover a promise
فلو كنتَ حراً ما مَطلتَ بموعدٍ
زهيدٍtrifling ولوand if أنجزتَyou fulfilled it كنتyou would have been المهذباthe well-bred one
زهيدٍ ولو أنجزتَ كنت المهذبا
For had you been noble, you would not have stalled over a promise
If you were free, you would not be late with a
So trifling; and had you fulfilled it, you would have been well-bred.
Modest appointment, and if you fulfilled it, you would be the polished one
Sol 6.1