ماwhat بالthe matter with شجوكyour sorrow ظاهرٌplain لمdid not تخفِهyou conceal it
ما بال شجوك ظاهرٌ لم تخفِه
أعليكdo you owe حقa debt مطالبa claimant لمhave not توفِهِyou paid it in full
أعليك حق مطالب لم توفِهِ
Why is your sorrow plain and unconcealed?
Why is your yearning apparent, you do not conceal it
Do you owe a claimant a debt you have not paid?
Do you have a rightful claim that has not been fulfilled
أمor قدindeed صبوتyou yearned إلىfor ربيthe hills of واديthe valley of الظباthe gazelles
أم قد صبوت إلى ربي وادي الظبا
فتلاso recited الغرامpassion عليكover you آيةَthe verse of حتفهits doom
فتلا الغرام عليك آيةَ حتفه
Or have you yearned for the hills of the Gazelles' Valley,
Or have you inclined towards the valley of gazelles’ Lord
so that passion recited over you the verse of its doom?
So the pangs of love befell you as a sign of its demise
أمor قدindeed ذكرتyou recalled غزالthe gazelle of ذيّاكthat الحمىpreserve
أم قد ذكرت غزال ذيّاك الحمى
بشهودat the sight of ظبيthe gazelle of الواديينthe two valleys وخشفهand its fawn
بشهود ظبي الواديين وخشفه
Or have you recalled the gazelle of that preserve
Or did you recall the antelope of your love
on seeing the gazelle of the two valleys and its fawn?
In the witnessing of the valley’s gazelles and rocky trails
فالشيءfor a thing معهودٌremembered برؤيةon seeing مثلهits like
فالشيء معهودٌ برؤية مثله
شكلاًin form ومذكورٌand recalled بنظرةat a glance at إلفهits companion
شكلاً ومذكورٌ بنظرة إلفه
For a thing is recalled on seeing its like
A thing is usual in seeing its like
in form, and remembered at a glimpse of its companion.
In appearance and mentioned in a glance of familiarity
ياO صاحبيَّmy two companions بلىyes indeed تذكَّرتُI recalled الحمىthe preserve
يا صاحبيَّ بلى تذكَّرتُ الحمى
فأثارso it stirred منof وجديmy longing الذيthat which لمdid not أُخفهI conceal it
فأثار من وجدي الذي لم أُخفه
O my two companions, yes, I recalled the preserve,
O my friend, yes, I recalled the antelope
and it stirred the longing in me that I did not conceal.
So it stirred the love I did not conceal
وأهاجand stirred أحزانيmy sorrows تألُّقthe flashing of بارقٍlightning
وأهاج أحزاني تألُّق بارقٍ
قدindeed لاحflashed منfrom نحوthe direction of الحمىthe preserve بلrather حرفهits edge
قد لاح من نحو الحمى بل حرفه
And the flashing of lightning stirred my sorrows—
And aroused my sorrows with a shining radiance
it shone from the preserve's direction—rather, from its edge.
That appeared from the direction of the antelope, even its horizon
طوراًat times كأنفاسيlike my sighs يدومit lasts وتارةand at other times
طوراً كأنفاسي يدوم وتارة
يبدوit appears فيخفيهthen conceals it الغمامthe cloud بسجفهwith its veil
يبدو فيخفيه الغمام بسجفه
At times it lasts like my sighs; at other times
Sometimes lasting like my breaths and other times
it appears, then the cloud hides it behind its veil.
Appearing then the clouds would hide it with its folds
والريحand the wind تذكيهfans it بماwith what قدhas already حمِّلتit was made to carry
والريح تذكيه بما قد حمِّلت
منيfrom me ويطفيهand quenches it السحابthe cloud بوكفهwith its falling rain
مني ويطفيه السحاب بوكفه
And the wind fans it with what it has been made to carry
And the wind would ignite it with what
from me, while the cloud quenches it with its falling rain.
It has carried from me, and the rain would extinguish it with its palm
وبمهجتيand in my soul ظبيa gazelle يصيدwho hunts بجيدهwith his neck الthe
وبمهجتي ظبي يصيد بجيده ال
آسادlions فضلاًto say nothing عنof كنانةthe quiver of طرفهhis glance
آساد فضلاً عن كنانة طرفه
And in my soul is a gazelle who hunts with his neck the
And in my love the gazelle hunts with its neck
lions, to say nothing of the quiver of his glance.
Lions besides the gracefulness of its glance
وبيand I am enamored of الذيhim who يُغنيهspares him the need ذابلُthe supple spear of قدِّهhis stature
وبي الذي يُغنيه ذابلُ قدِّه
عنin place of رمحهhis lance ولحاظُهand his glances عنin place of سيفهhis sword
عن رمحه ولحاظُه عن سيفه
And I am enamored of him whose supple, spear-like stature replaces
And in me, the one who sings its slender waist
his lance, and whose glances replace his sword.
Neglecting his spear and his sword its sheath
قدindeed فاقhe surpassed بدرَthe full moon التِّمِّfullness فيin تدويرهhis roundness
قد فاق بدرَ التِّمِّ في تدويره
فتأنَّso take your time بالإشراقin shining ليلةon the night of نصفهits halfway point
فتأنَّ بالإشراق ليلة نصفه
He has surpassed the full moon in roundness;
It surpassed the full moon in its revolution
so delay your shining on the midmonth night.
So the night of its half looked on in admiration
غصنٌa bough تؤوِّدهbend it رياحthe winds of دلالهhis coquetry
غصنٌ تؤوِّده رياح دلاله
تيهاًproudly وتثبتهand holds it steady رزانةthe weight of ردفهhis haunches
تيهاً وتثبته رزانة ردفه
A bough that the winds of his coquetry bend
A branch made delicate by the winds of its charm
in pride, while the weight of his haunches keeps it steady.
Lost yet steady in the composure of its poise
جسدٌa body منfrom الجريالpure gold قوِّمwas fashioned شكلهits form
جسدٌ من الجريال قوِّم شكله
لكنّماyet الوصّافthe master describer حارwas bewildered بوصفهin describing him
لكنّما الوصّاف حار بوصفه
A body whose form was fashioned from pure gold;
A body of smooth silk, upright is its shape
yet the master describer is at a loss to describe him.
But the describer was confused in describing it
هوhe كيمياءthe alchemy of الحسنbeauty إكسيرthe elixir of البهاsplendor
هو كيمياء الحسن إكسير البها
كنزُa treasure of الملاحةloveliness فيin الجمالbeauty ولطفهand his grace
كنزُ الملاحة في الجمال ولطفه
He is the alchemy of beauty, the elixir of splendor,
It is the elixir of beauty, the chemistry of charm
a treasure of loveliness in his beauty and his grace.
The treasure of splendor in beauty and its subtlety
ملكhe possessed القلوبhearts بمشرفيِّwith the Mashrafi sword of لحاظهhis glances
ملك القلوب بمشرفيِّ لحاظه
فشهودهso his witnesses فيon وجنتيهhis two cheeks وكفِّهand his palm
فشهوده في وجنتيه وكفِّه
He conquered hearts with the Mashrafi sword of his glances;
The king of hearts with the nobility of its gaze
and his witnesses are on his cheeks and his palm.
So its witnesses are in its cheeks and palm
وكأنand as though مغناطيسthe magnet of قلبيmy heart ذاتُهhis very being
وكأن مغناطيس قلبي ذاتُه
تقضيrules عليهover it بجذبِهby drawing it in وبجذفهand by tearing it away
تقضي عليه بجذبِه وبجذفه
And his very being seems the magnet of my heart,
As if my heart’s magnet was its very essence
ruling over it by drawing it in and tearing it away.
Capturing it with its pull and push
قدindeed فرَّfled قلبيmy heart نحوهtoward him ولقدand indeed غداit has come to be
قد فرَّ قلبي نحوه ولقد غدا
ماthe space بينbetween لبَّتِهthe hollow of his throat وملعبand the dancing-place of شنفهhis earring
ما بين لبَّتِه وملعب شنفه
My heart has fled toward him, and now it lies
My heart has fled to it and it has become
between the hollow of his throat and his earring's dancing-place.
Between its affection and the field of its prowess
لاnay والذيby Him who أولاهgave him صعبunruly مقادتيmy reins
لا والذي أولاه صعب مقادتي
وأذلّand humbled عزميmy resolve باللّحاظwith glances وعطفهand his graceful form
وأذلّ عزمي باللّحاظ وعطفه
Nay, by Him who gave him my unruly reins,
No, by Him who enabled its difficult leading
and humbled my resolve with his glances and his graceful form—
And humiliated my determination with its gaze and compassion
ماnot خُلتُI strayed (contextual reading) عنfrom سَنَنthe path of المحبةlove كارهاًhating
ما خُلتُ عن سَنَن المحبة كارهاً
مضضَthe anguish of الجفاءcoldness بظُلمهwith his oppression وبحيفهand his injustice
مضضَ الجفاء بظُلمه وبحيفه
I have not strayed from love's path, though I loathe
I have not averted the ways of love unwillingly
the pangs of coldness, with his oppression and injustice.
Disliking the injustice and unfairness of estrangement
كلاnever ولاnor خطرُthe danger of السلوذِforgetfulness (apparently intended) بخاطرٍin a mind
كلا ولا خطرُ السلوذِ بخاطرٍ
هوhe حاضرٌpresent تمثالهhis likeness فيwithin جوفهits depths
هو حاضرٌ تمثاله في جوفه
Never! Nor is there danger of forgetting in a mind
No, and the idea of indifference has not occurred to a mind
within whose depths his image is present.
Which has its shape present in its interior
كيفhow السلوُّforgetfulness ومهجتيwhile my soul مطروحةcast down
كيف السلوُّ ومهجتي مطروحة
رهنa pledge of المقلِّthe pauper علىupon مواطئthe places trodden by خصفهhis woven sandals
رهن المقلِّ على مواطئ خصفه
How could I forget, while my soul lies cast down,
How can there be indifference while my love is placed
a pauper's pledge, where his woven sandals tread?
Hostage to the glance upon the plains of its rock
لوif أشربI drank السلوانforgetfulness لمwould not أسلُI forget ولوand if
لو أشرب السلوان لم أسلُ ولو
أدخلتI plunged قلبيmy heart دجلةًinto the Tigris لمwould not تطفهit quench it
أدخلت قلبي دجلةً لم تطفه
Were I to drink oblivion, I would not forget; and even if
Even if I were to drink indifference I would not be indifferent
I plunged my heart into the Tigris, it would not quench it.
And if my heart entered the Euphrates it would not extinguish it
فيin حسنthe beauty of يوسفJoseph قدindeed تجلّىhe appeared باهراdazzling
في حسن يوسف قد تجلّى باهرا
وبحزنand with the sorrow of يعقوبJacob غدوتُI became وضعفهand his frailty
وبحزن يعقوب غدوتُ وضعفه
He appeared, dazzling, in Joseph's beauty,
In Yusuf’s beauty it has appeared brilliantly
while I was left with Jacob's sorrow and his frailty.
And in Ya’qub’s sorrow I have become and his weakness
فمنso who البشيرis the herald بعَودهof his return وإيابهand his coming back
فمن البشير بعَوده وإيابه
نحويtoward me ومنand who يأتيbrings الكئيبthe sorrowful man بشفِّهwith his sheer garment
نحوي ومن يأتي الكئيب بشفِّه
Who, then, will bring glad tidings of his return and coming back
So who brings the good tidings of his return and coming
to me? And who will bring the sorrowful man his sheer robe?
Back to me and who will bring the sorrowful one with his remedy
ياO بدرُfull moon إنif شطّis distant المزارthe meeting-place ولمand cannot تطقyou manage
يا بدرُ إن شطّ المزار ولم تطق
وصلاًunion فزرنيthen visit me فيin المنامsleep وطيفهand its dream-vision
وصلاً فزرني في المنام وطيفه
O full moon, if the meeting-place is far and you cannot manage
O full moon, if the land has become narrow and you could not
union, then visit me in sleep and its dream-vision.
Manage union then visit me in the dream and its ghosts
ماnot هكذاlike this دَدَنُthe play of الظباءthe gazelles العينwide-eyed بلrather
ما هكذا دَدَنُ الظباء العين بل
ماnot هكذاlike this صنعُthe conduct of الأليفan intimate companion بإلفهtoward his beloved
ما هكذا صنعُ الأليف بإلفه
Not so do the wide-eyed gazelles play; no,
The gazelles do not stroke the eye like this, no
this is not how a companion treats his beloved.
The familiar one does not treat his familiarity like that
فلقدfor indeed حفتَyou swore (apparently intended) وماand not أظنُّكI think you مازحاًjoking
فلقد حفتَ وما أظنُّك مازحاً
حينwhen اصطحابيmy companionship with you بالرضابover sweet saliva ورشفهand sipping it
حين اصطحابي بالرضاب ورشفه
For you swore—and I do not think you were joking—
For you have indeed pledged while I do not think you jesting
when we shared sweet saliva and sipped it,
When you made me your companion with consent and its ease
أنthat لاnot تميلyou incline إلىtoward الوشاةthe slanderers وقولهمand their words
أن لا تميل إلى الوشاة وقولهم
والحرُّand a noble man أولىought above all أنto يبُرَّkeep faith بحلفهwith his oath
والحرُّ أولى أن يبُرَّ بحلفه
that you would not incline toward the slanderers and their words;
That you do not incline towards the slanderers and their words
and a noble man ought above all to keep his oath.
While the free one is most deserving that his covenant is proven by his oath
فارحمso pity فديتكmay I be your ransom حرقتيmy burning anguish وتولّهيand my bewildered longing
فارحم فديتك حرقتي وتولّهي
واعطفand show tenderness فقدfor indeed فنِيَhas perished الفؤادthe heart بسوفهthrough his promises of 'soon'
واعطف فقد فنِيَ الفؤاد بسوفه
So pity my burning anguish and bewildered longing—may I be your ransom—
So have mercy, love, on my burning and confusion
and show tenderness: the heart has perished through his promises of 'soon.'
And be compassionate for the heart has perished due to waiting
فلقدfor indeed أطعتُI obeyed هواكmy love for you منقاداًsubmitting لهto it
فلقد أطعتُ هواك منقاداً له
وعصيتُand I disobeyed ماwhat جاءbrought العذولthe reproacher بعسفهwith his harshness
وعصيتُ ما جاء العذول بعسفه
For I have obeyed my love for you, yielding to it,
For I have obeyed your love submissive to it
and defied the reproacher's harsh dictates.
And disobeyed what the separation came with from its harshness
ورأيتُand I saw كلall الرايsound judgment رفضrejecting عواذليmy reproachers
ورأيتُ كل الراي رفض عواذلي
والناسand people بينare divided between مُصوِّبٍone who deems me right ومسفِّهand one who calls me foolish
والناس بين مُصوِّبٍ ومسفِّه
And I saw all good sense in rejecting my reproachers,
And I have seen all opinions refuse my love
while some judge me right and others call me foolish.
And the people between supporter and critic
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