شاقَنيstirred my longing أنَّهاthat she عَشيَّةon the evening بانَتshe departed
شاقَني أنَّها عَشيَّة بانَت
أمرَتshe commanded طَرفَهاher gaze بِأمرٍwith a command طَريفِcurious
أمرَت طَرفَها بِأمرٍ طَريفِ
She stirred my longing when, one evening, she departed,
What stirred my longing was that, on the evening she departed,
She tormented me, for at dusk
having charged her glance with a charming command.
she charged her gaze with a curious task:
She bid her glances do something charming—
حينَwhen أغرَتهُshe incited it بيagainst me فَأَغرَتand so she incited منout of الحرthe eagerness (first part)
حينَ أغرَتهُ بي فَأَغرَت من الحر
صِ(final part of 'eagerness') ضَعيفاًa weak one واهيfeeble القُوىthe powers بِضَعيفِagainst a weak one
صِ ضَعيفاً واهي القُوى بِضَعيفِ
When she urged it toward me, then, out of eager—
when she incited it against me, she eagerly set
When she seduced me with her eyes, she seduced
—ness, she lured one weak and failing in strength with a languid glance.
one weak and frail in strength against another weak one.
One weak of form, and whose strength is weak in resolve
Sol 6.1