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I saw a lover tending to his beloved

رأيت محبا يداوي حبيبا

1. I saw a lover tending to his beloved
My heart almost melted for him

١. رأيتُ مُحبّاً يداوي حبيباً
فكاد فؤادي له أن يذوبا

2. And I compared his complaints in praising him
To the complaints of a sick man tended by a doctor

٢. وشبَّهتُ شكواه في رفعه
بشكوى عليلٍ يُداوي طبيبا