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He met me with beautyโ€”fair, soft-skinned,

ูˆู‚ุงุจู„ู†ูŠ ุจุงู„ุญุณู† ุฃุจูŠุถ ู†ุงุนู…

1. He met me with beautyโ€”fair, soft-skinned,
And a dark one, sweet, who at dawn were the world's temptation,

ูก. ูˆูŽู‚ุงุจูŽู„ูŽู†ูŠ ุจูุงู„ุญูุณู†ู ุฃูŽุจูŠูŽุถู ู†ุงุนูู…ูŒ
ูˆูŽุฃูŽุณู…ูŽุฑู ุญูู„ูˆูŒ ุฃูŽุตุจูŽุญุง ููุชู†ูŽุฉูŽ ุงู„ูˆูŽุฑู‰

2. So one released arrows from his eyelids when he glanced,
And the other shook spears from his shoulders when he turned.

ูข. ููŽุฐุง ุณูŽู„ู‘ูŽ ู…ูู† ุฌูŽูู†ูŽูŠู‡ู ู„ู„ุถูŽุฑุจู ุฃูŽุจูŠูŽุถุงู‹
ูˆูŽุฐุง ู‡ูŽุฒู‘ูŽ ู…ูู† ุนูุทููŽูŠู‡ู ู„ูู„ุทูŽุนู†ู ุฃูŽุณู…ูŽุฑุง

3. And loving them both has now become my occupation.
So which of them moves remote, and my joy is troubled?

ูฃ. ูˆูŽู‚ูŽุฏ ุตุงุฑูŽ ู„ูŠ ุดูุบู„ูŒ ุจูุญุจูŠู‡ูู…ุง ู…ูŽุนุงู‹
ููŽุฃูŽูŠู‘ูู‡ู…ุง ูŠูŽู†ุฃู‰ ููŽุตููˆูŠ ุชูŽูƒูŽุฏู‘ูŽุฑุง

4. And if they draw near, my life becomes delicious,
But if they distance from me, I see death dyed red.

ูค. ูˆูŽุฅูู† ูŠูŽู‚ุฑูุจุง ูƒุงู†ูŽุช ุญูŽูŠุงุชูŠ ู„ูŽุฐูŠุฐูŽุฉู‹
ูˆูŽุฅูู† ูŠุจุนูุฏุง ุนูŽู†ู‘ูŠ ุฃูŽุฑู‰ ุงู„ู…ูŽูˆุชูŽ ุฃูŽุญู…ูŽุฑุง

5. Would that my heart had been satisfied with just oneโ€”
It would suffice me, but my breast was cleft in two,

ูฅ. ููŽูŠุง ู„ูŽูŠุชูŽ ู‚ูŽู„ุจูŠ ู‚ูŽุฏ ุชูŽุนูŽู†ู‘ู‰ ุจููˆุงุญูุฏู
ููŽูŠูŽุบู†ู‰ ุจูู‡ ู„ูŽูƒู† ููุคุงุฏููŠ ุชูŽุดูŽุทู‘ูŽุฑุง

6. One half lies with one who knows not of my love,
One half lies with a gazelle who knows and knows not.

ูฆ. ููŽุดูŽุทุฑูŒ ู„ูŽุฏู‰ ู…ูŽู† ู„ุง ุดูุนูˆุฑูŽ ู„ูŽู‡ู ุจูู‡ู
ูˆูŽุดูŽุทุฑูŒ ู„ูŽุฏู‰ ุฑูŠู…ู ุฏูŽุฑู‰ ู…ูู†ู‡ู ูˆูŽู…ุง ุฏูŽุฑู‰

7. How strange is passionโ€”it split his heart in two!
This heart falling for twoโ€”the strangest thing to see.

ูง. ููŽูŠุง ุนูŽุฌูŽุจุงู‹ ู„ู„ุตู‘ูŽุจู‘ู ู‚ูŽุณู‘ูŽู…ูŽ ู‚ูŽู„ุจูŽู‡
ู‡ูŽูˆู‰ ุงูุซู†ูŠู†ู ู‡ูŽุฐุง ุงู„ู‚ูŽู„ุจู ุฃูŽุนุฌูŽุจู ู…ุง ูŠูุฑู‰