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I thanked his generosity for a friendly day

شكرت ليوم النوى جوده

1. I thanked his generosity for a friendly day
That healed me with a visitor whose friendship took my pain away

١. شكرت ليومِ النوى جودَه
عليّ بمن شفَّني صدُّهُ

2. I made my farewells an excuse to see his face again
And let me kiss his cheek though departure was ordained

٢. جعلت التوادُعَ لي عِلَّةً
وأمكنني عنده خدّه

3. So I could kiss his rosy cheek before we went our ways
That burning kiss unleashed the tears that poured down from his eyes

٣. فأودعتُ وَجْنَتَهُ قُبْلةً
شفَتْ مُهْجَةً شفّها بُعْدُه

4. As though my tears upon his cheek were strung in flowery bands
Like raindrops in a jasmine necklace strung upon his face

٤. كأنّ دموعي على وجهه
نِظام جُمانٍ وَهَي عِقْدُه