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I suffer, consumed by passionโ€™s heat,

ุจู„ูŠุช ูˆู„ุฌ ุจูŠ ูˆุฌุฏูŠ ุจุธุจูŠ

1. I suffer, consumed by passionโ€™s heat,
Tormented by a wand โ€˜mid folds discreet,

ูก. ุจูู„ููŠุชู ูˆูŽู„ูŽุฌู‘ ุจูŠ ูˆูŽุฌู’ุฏููŠ ุจูุธูŽุจู’ูŠู
ูŠูŽุตูุฏู‘ู ูˆู…ุง ุจูู‡ู ุฅู„ุงู‘ ู„ูŽุฌูŽุงุฌู

2. Softness and joy both take part in this feat,
Yet he refuses, showing only conceit,

ูข. ูˆุนุฐู‘ูŽุจูŽู†ูŠ ู‚ูŽุถูŠุจูŒ ููŠ ูƒูŽุซูŠุจู
ุชูŽุดูŽุงุฑูŽูƒูŽ ููŠู‡ ู„ููŠู†ูŒ ูˆุงู†ุฏูู…ูŽุงุฌู

3. I envy when a cup comes near his seat,
Kissing pearls, the crystal they meet.

ูฃ. ุฃุบุงุฑ ุฅุฐุง ุฏูŽู†ูŽุชู’ ู…ูู†ู’ ููŠู‡ู ูƒุงุณูŒ
ุนู„ู‰ ุฏูุฑู‘ู ูŠูู‚ูŽุจู‘ูู„ูู‡ู ุฒูุฌูŽุงุฌู