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I said to the cup as I looked upon it,

قد قلت للكأس وأبصرتها

1. I said to the cup as I looked upon it,
"Blessed are you, O cup, when his lips touch you!"

١. قَدْ قُلْتُ لِلْكَأسِ وَأَبْصَرْتُهَا
تَلْثُمُهُ طُوبَاكَ يَا كَاسَهُ

2. Blessed are you when I bring you close to his mouth
And you steal the moisture of his breath.

٢. طُوَباكَ إِذْ أَدْنَاكَ مِنْ ثَغْرِهِ
فَاخْتَلَسَتْ رَيَّاكَ أَنْفَاسَهُ