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I saw him in frustration writing

ورأيته في الطرس يكتب مرة

1. I saw him in frustration writing
A mistake he keeps erasing with his blows

١. ورأيتُه في الطِّرسِ يكتُبُ مرةً
غلطاً يُواصِل محوَهُ بِرُضابِهِ

2. I wished I was a paper in his hand
I wished he would not find his way or compose

٢. فوددتُ أنّي في يده صحيفةٌ
ووددتُه لا يهتَدِي لصَوابِهِ