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I have become with no wealth but hope

أصبحت لا مال لي سوى الأمل

1. I have become with no wealth but hope
And that I work without work

١. أَصْبَحْتُ لاَ مَالَ لِي سِوَى الأَمَلِ
وَأَنَّنِي عَامِلٌ بِلاَ عَمَلِ

2. And I have a persistent cunning creditor
Whose guiles have wearied my guiles

٢. وَلِي غَرِيْمٌ مُوَاصِلٌ خَتِلٌ
أَعْجَزَ فَضْلُ احْتِيَالِهِ حِيَلِي

3. Nothing stands between us except
I imagined he is my appointed time

٣. مَا حُدَّ بَيْنِي وَبَيْنَهُ أَجَلٌ
إِلاَّ تَوَهَّمْتُ أَنَّهُ أَجَلِي

4. A lip has been sweetened by sipping
Its suckling is sweeter than attaining hopes

٤. عَذُبَتْ بِالرَّشْفِ مِنْهُ شَفَةٌ
مَصُّهَا أَطْيَبُ مِنْ نَيْلِ الأَمَلْ

5. And redness has risen in a cheek
That borrows its color from the dye of shyness

٥. وَعَلَتْهَا حُمْرَةٌ فِي لَعَسٍ
تَسْتَعِيْرُ اللَّوْنَ مِنْ صِبْغِ الخَجَلْ

6. It is, while I passed, traces of blood
From my heart, so it overflowed and dripped

٦. هِيَ فِيْمَا خِلْتُ آثارُ دَمٍ
مِنْ فُؤَادِي عَلَّ فِيْهِ وَنَهَلْ