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With a fresh, bright complexion at dawn

ู‚ุฏ ุฃุบุชุฏูŠ ุจุฒุฑู‚ ุตุจูŠุญ

1. With a fresh, bright complexion at dawn
Evident to whoever examines him closely.

ูก. ู‚ูŽุฏ ุฃูŽุบุชูŽุฏูŠ ุจูุฒูุฑู‘ูŽู‚ู ุตูŽุจูŠุญู
ู…ูŽุญุถู ู„ูู…ูŽู† ูŠูŽู†ุณูุจูู‡ู ุตูŽุฑูŠุญู

2. The cheeks' prayer is clear and beautiful,
Not what is implied like what is correct.

ูข. ุตูŽู„ุชู ุงู„ุฎูุฏูˆุฏู ูˆุงุถูุญู ู…ูŽู„ูŠุญู
ูˆูŽู„ูŽูŠุณูŽ ู…ุง ูŠูุบู…ูŽุฒู ูƒูŽุงู„ุตูŽุญูŠุญู

3. With a miser's palm that purchased it
With an exorbitant price,

ูฃ. ุจููƒูŽูู‘ู ุถูŽู†ู‘ุงู†ู ุจูู‡ู ุดูŽุญูŠุญู
ู…ูู…ู‘ุง ุงูุดุชูŽุฑู‰ ุจูุงู„ุซูŽู…ูŽู†ู ุงู„ุฑูŽุจูŠุญู

4. He did not stop blowing and making fun
Sprinkling it with water and waving,

ูค. ููŽู„ูŽู… ูŠูŽุฒูŽู„ ุจูุงู„ู†ูŽู‡ู…ู ูˆูŽุงู„ุชูŽู‚ุฏูŠุญู
ูˆูŽุฑูŽุดู‘ูู‡ู ุจูุงู„ู…ุงุกู ูˆูŽุงู„ุชูŽู„ูˆูŠุญู

5. Until he retired except for the soul's gardens,
And knew the voice and the inspirer's revelation.

ูฅ. ุญูŽุชู‘ู‰ ุงูู†ุทูŽูˆู‰ ุฅูู„ู‘ุง ุฌูŽู†ุงู†ูŽ ุงู„ุฑูˆุญู
ูˆูŽุนูŽุฑูŽูู ุงู„ุตูŽูˆุชู ูˆูŽูˆูŽุญูŠู ุงู„ู…ูˆุญูŠ

6. So how much and how much of ambitious height
Did its ambition not deliver on the tablet,

ูฆ. ููŽูƒูŽู… ูˆูŽูƒูŽู… ู…ูู† ุทููˆู‘ูŽู„ู ุทูŽู…ูˆุญู
ู„ูŽู… ูŠูู†ุฌูู‡ู ุทูู…ูˆุฑูู‡ู ููŠ ุงู„ู„ูˆุญู

7. From the slips and lapses of feeble prayers
That the wind topples with the windโ€™s palm

ูง. ู…ูู† ููŽู„ูŽุชุงุชู ุตูŽู„ูŽุชุงุชู ุดูŠุญู
ุชูุฑุฌูู„ูู‡ู ุงู„ุฑูŠุญู ุจููƒูŽูู‘ู ุงู„ุฑูŠุญู

8. And a blow with a shaken spear
So he hunted before the time of dispersal

ูจ. ูˆูŽุถูŽุฑุจูŽุฉู ุจูู†ูŽูŠุฒูŽูƒู ู…ูŽุฐุฑูˆุญู
ููŽุงูุตุทุงุฏูŽ ู‚ูŽุจู„ูŽ ุงู„ุฃูŽูŠู†ู ูˆูŽุงู„ุชูŽุจุฑูŠุญู

9. Fifty shy ones to the slaughter
Fifty shy ones to the slaughter

ูฉ. ุฎูŽู…ุณูŠู†ูŽ ู…ูุณุชูŽุญูŠู‰ู‹ ุฅูู„ู‰ ู…ูŽุฐุจูˆุญู
ุฎูŽู…ุณูŠู†ูŽ ู…ูุณุชูŽุญูŠู‰ู‹ ุฅูู„ู‰ ู…ูŽุฐุจูˆุญู