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She wrote on her ring's bezel:

كتبت على فص لخاتمها

1. She wrote on her ring's bezel:
He who loves and then sleeps, may he never rest

١. كَتَبَت عَلى فَصٍّ لِخاتَمِها
مَن مَلَّ مَحبوباً فَلا رَقَدا

2. So I wrote on mine to reach her:
He who sleeps lacks the sense of one awake

٢. فَكَتَبتُ في فَصٍّ لِيَبلُغَها
مَن نامَ لَم يَعقِل كَمَن سَهِدا

3. She erased it and wrote to reach me:
He who loves does not sleep or lie down

٣. فَمَحَتهُ وَاِكتَتَبَت لِيَبلُغَني
لا نامَ مَن يَهوى وَلا هَجَدا

4. I erased mine, then wrote myself:
By God, the first dead was inert

٤. فَمَحَيتُهُ ثُمَّ اِكتَتَبتُ أَنا
وَاللَهِ أَوَّلُ مَيِّتٍ كَمَدا

5. So she erased and wrote to counter me:
By God, I shall never speak to him again

٥. فَمَحَتهُ وَاِكتَتَبَت تُعارِضُني
وَاللَهِ لا كَلَّمتُهُ أَبَدا