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I became sleepless as if I were in love with sleeplessness,

ุฃุฑู‚ุช ุญุชู‰ ูƒุฃู†ูŠ ุฃุนุดู‚ ุงู„ุฃุฑู‚ุง

1. I became sleepless as if I were in love with sleeplessness,
And I wasted away as if sickness was created for me.

ูก. ุฃุฑู‚ุชู ุญุชู‰ ูƒุฃู†ูŠ ุฃุนุดู‚ู ุงู„ุฃุฑูŽู‚ุง
ูˆุฐูุจุชู ุญุชู‰ ูƒุฃู†ู‘ูŽ ุงู„ุณู‚ู…ูŽ ู„ูŠ ุฎูู„ูู‚ุง

2. My tears flowed down my cheek and burned it,
So whoever saw a drowning man burning in water?

ูข. ูˆูุงุถูŽ ุฏูŽู…ุนูŠ ุนู„ู‰ ุฎูŽุฏูŠ ูุฃุญุฑู‚ู‡ู
ูู…ู† ุฑุฃู‰ ุบุฑู‚ุงู‹ ููŠ ุงู„ู…ุงุก ู…ุญุชุฑูู‚ุง

3. The paths of tears from my eyes to my liver
Overflowed, even though speaking would cure me.

ูฃ. ู…ุณุงู„ูƒู ุงู„ุฏู…ุนู ู…ู† ุนูŠู†ูŠ ุฅู„ู‰ ูƒุจุฏูŠ
ุฃุทุบู‰ ูˆุฅู† ูƒุงู† ูŠุดููŠู†ูŠ ุฅุฐุง ู†ุทู‚ุง

4. And someone said to me, โ€œWhere is your patience?โ€ I said to him,
โ€œMy heart is full of sorrows, so it caught fire.โ€

ูค. ูˆู‚ุงุฆู„ู ู„ูŠ ุฃูŠู† ุงู„ุตุจุฑู ู‚ู„ุชู ู„ู‡
ู…ู„ู‘ูŽ ุงู„ูุคุงุฏู ู…ู† ุงู„ุฃุญุฒุงู†ู ูุงุญุชุฑู‚ุง