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With longing and hopeful thoughts her gaze moves ahead

وخلجة ظن يسبق الطرف حزمها

1. With longing and hopeful thoughts her gaze moves ahead
She milks the sheep and handles the pail steadily

١. وَخلجةِ ظَنٍّ يَسبِق الطَرفَ حَزمُها
تُشيف عَلى غُنم وَتُمكِن مِن ذَحلِ

2. I called her while the people milled about chaotic as though
A square enclosure where ewes jostle for the ram

٢. صَدعتُ بِها وَالقَومُ فَوضى كَأَنَّهُم
بِكارةُ مِرباع تُبَصبِصُ لِلفَحلِ