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He aimed his arrows and struck me deaf

ุฃุฑุงุด ู†ุจุงู„ ู…ู‚ู„ุชู‡ ูุฃุตู…ู‰

1. He aimed his arrows and struck me deaf
A weakened gazelle, pained by his glances

ูก. ุฃุฑุงุดูŽ ู†ุจุงู„ ู…ูู‚ู„ุชู‡ ููŽุฃูŽุตู…ู‰
ุบุฒุงู„ูŒ ูุงุชุฑู ุงู„ู„ูŽุญุธุงุช ุฃู„ู…ู‰

2. He makes excuses with โ€œsoonโ€ and โ€œperhapsโ€ and โ€œuntilโ€
And โ€œmaybeโ€ and โ€œif onlyโ€ and โ€œnotโ€ and โ€œnoโ€ and โ€œifโ€

ูข. ูŠูุนู„ูู‘ู„ู†ูŠ ุจูุณูŽูˆู ูˆูŽู‡ู„ ูˆูŽุญุชู‘ู‰
ูˆู‚ุฏ ูˆูŽุนุณู‰ ูˆู„ูŽูŠุช ูˆู„ู… ูˆู„ุง ูˆู„ูŽู…ู‘ุง

3. So I thank him abundantly for explaining
And he criticizes me extensively for kindness

ูฃ. ูุฃูˆุณุนู‡ ุนู„ู‰ ุงู„ุชูŽูุณูŠุญ ุญู…ุฏุงู‹
ูˆูŽูŠูˆุณุนู†ูŠ ุนู„ู‰ ุงู„ุฅูุญุณุงู† ุฐู…ู‘ุง