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I thought one night of joining with her, but she spurned me,

فكرت ليلة وصلها في صدها

1. I thought one night of joining with her, but she spurned me,
So the remnants of my tears flowed like liquid amber.

١. فَكَّرْتُ لَيْلَةٍ وَصْلِها في صَدِّها
فَجَرَتْ بَقايا أَدْمُعي كالْعَنْدَمِ

2. I began to wipe my eyelids on her throat,
For camphor's nature is to staunch the flow of blood.

٢. فَطَفِقْتُ أَمْسَحُ مُقْلَتي في نَحْرِها
إِذْ عادَةُ الكافُورِ امْساكُ الدَّمِ